Again, written on the spur of the moment...not particularly talented, but i like the simplicity of the rhyming scheme and rythm...gives it a childish feel, like something chanted in the playground.

I have no intention of working on it any further, it's not really worth it. Posted not so much for comments on the actual poetry, (as I know it is very flawed and nothing special) but more becasue it gives a glimpse of what i'm really like. I've been going through an odd time finding out who the hell i really am at the moment, and making up little ditties like this helps me a bit.

I'm f*cking great, everyone look at me.
I'm better than you, I'm what you want to be.
When I'm gone, I know I'll be missed;
Don't you get it? I'm a f*cking narcissist.
Whoever I am, I am for your sake,
The person you love is a big
f*cking
fake.



(edited by Gabriel: content)