This is a song I wrote....

[u]Refined[/u]

Please god tell me,
What am I doing here,
What do I live for,
I can feel the skin of her lip's so near,
The one, the only one who I adore,
I no longer have to fear and run,
Hiding away in my shapeless box,
Stairing point blank down the barral of a gun,
I have no money but I'll by you rock's,
I'm not religious but still I'll pray,
So do the murder's that wake up everyday,

I would like to know how to be free,
I'm sure that I'm going insane,
I'd like you to listen to the people inside me,
And I'll stop placing the blame,
I growl inside out,
I'm a hollow shell,
Watching myself scream and shout,
I'll burn you alive as well,

Oh my love you're so divine,
And when my lip's touch your's one day,
Soon I will be past my time,
I have four hundred years to pay,

What can you possibly see in me?,
God? No,
What was I placed here for?,
I shouldn't have clawed myway out of the womb,
Soon I'll be gone like the shadow of a ghost,
Soon enough I'll be in my tomb,
But before I do I want you to know,

Oh my love you're so divine,
And when my lip's touch your's one day,
Soon I will be past my time,
I have four hundred years to pay,

All I have done to you will be forgiven,
I will never let you go,
All shall not be forgotten,
And I want you to know,

Oh my love you're so divine,
I have four hundred years,
To spend my time,
Thinking of you for evermore,
Nver sheading a tear.

Let me know what you think please so me know if the song is any good or not.